On Friday, October 13th, my English teacher had everyone write a test. On the last part, I had to read a paragraph, then create the first sentence of the next paragraph. Here is the paragraph we were given:
May was a hot month. The days passed slowly. There was no rain. The red sun shone brilliantly and brown skin became black. The wide rivers shrank quickly to little streams. Black crows gorged on the ripe and juicy mangoes. Red bananas ripened plentifully. Jackfruits burst readily. Tired mosquitos hummed vacuously in the fruity air. The flies stunned themselves against the clear windowpanes and died instantly. The nights were clear but filled frightfully with sullen expectation.
This is the sentence I wrote:
Hours had passed, yet the solemn silence continued to haunt the morning, with the ocean wearily trembling below, bleeding as the sun rose once again.
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